Ashes of October Chapter 14 of 19
Chapter Fourteen

Chapter Fourteen

Three years before Mark’s death.

Miguel had been sitting at the bar for forty minutes when his phone finally buzzed.

Give me fifteen minutes.

He set the phone face-down and went back to watching the door.

The bar was half-asleep for a Tuesday night — bartender wiping the same glass, an old man hunched over whiskey, a couple in the back booth not speaking.

Miguel’s beer sat half-full. He dragged his thumb through the condensation pooling beneath it. Mark would’ve joked about him nursing it.

His eyes tracked the door. A vehicle passed outside, headlights glancing across the window. Not it. He’d been doing this all day without meaning to — sorting every vehicle that crossed his path into threat or nothing, the way he sorted exits and sightlines. A white pickup that morning, parked too long at the edge of a school lot. He hadn’t seen it since. That kind of thing didn’t let go of him.

He took a drink. The beer had gone warm.

The door opened and Mark came through. He spotted Miguel immediately, crossed to the bar without hesitation. Miguel had taken the booth against the back wall, but the bar had better angles, clearer sightlines. He’d moved after ten minutes.

Mark slid onto the stool next to him. His eyes went to Miguel’s beer, then away. Something shifted in his expression, quick as a blink, then gone.

“Hey,” Mark said.

“Hey.”

The bartender appeared. Mark ordered without looking at the taps behind the bar.

“Coke.”

“That it?”

“That’s it.”

The bartender came back with a highball glass packed with ice and a black straw, as if he were trying to be funny.

Mark gave him a crooked smile, plucked the straw out, and smacked it onto the bar top with a sharp tack. The bartender didn’t flinch. Mark took a long drink.

Miguel waited.

“You look like shit, hermano,” Mark said finally.

Miguel’s mouth twitched. Almost a smile. “Thanks.”

“When’s the last time you slept?”

“Don’t start.”

“I’m starting.” Mark’s voice was gentle but firm. The voice of someone who’d earned the right to push. “You called me. I came. What’s going on?”

Miguel turned his beer bottle. The condensation had made a ring that connected to the previous ring, connected to the one before that. Overlapping circles spreading across the bar surface.

“Six years today,” he said quietly.

Mark nodded once, and let the silence hold it.

The TV above the bar played highlights from a game neither of them watched. Coins clattered near the jukebox, and a slow blues riff came out — raw and frayed at the edges.

Miguel looked at him. Mark’s shoulders carried tension, the kind that came from fighting something every day. But his eyes were clearer than they’d been in months.

“How long’s it been?”

“Thirteen months. Three weeks.”

The precision of it. Every day counted.

“That’s good, hermano.”

“Some days.” He stared at his Coke, turned the glass, ice shifting. “Every day in a bar’s a bad day. But I’m here. So.”

“I shouldn’t have asked you to—”

“That’s how this works.”

“Ana wanted to light a candle at church," he said. "I told her to take Sofia, I’d meet them for dinner.”

“But?”

“The truck was back.”

Mark reached for his glass, stopped halfway. “Same one?”

Miguel looked past the bottles, the amber light running thin across the wall. “White pickup. Lifted, probably thirty-five-inch tires. Driver’s side window tinted darker than legal. Shows up at the school lot, same spot every day. Three hundred meters out.”

Mark didn’t say anything.

“How long?”

“Three weeks. Maybe four.”

“Same driver?”

“Can’t see through the tint. But yeah. I think so.”

“He just sits there?”

“Just sits there. Watching.”

"And we still don’t know what this fucker wants?"

Miguel shook his head, slow.

Mark huffed, took a pull off his Coke. “What’d the school say?”

“That he’s parked on public property. Nothing they can do.”

“Police?”

"Same as the school.”

“Even after you told them—”

“Especially after I told them.” Miguel’s voice went hard. “Guy at the station said maybe if we ‘kept our heads down’ we wouldn’t have these problems.”

Mark had heard that one before.

The jukebox kicked over. Some old country song now. The old guy at the end of the bar was talking to himself, quiet words that didn’t carry.

“You remember that test?” Miguel asked. “The citizenship one?”

“The ten questions.” Mark nodded. “James Madison. Twenty-seven amendments. You knew all that already.”

“I knew the answers. That’s different.”

Mark looked at him, waiting.

Miguel ran his thumb down the beer bottle’s neck. “Back home, if you knew the answers, it didn’t matter. Wrong last name, wrong neighborhood—” He shook his head. “Here, you made me believe the answers were enough.”

“They should be,” Mark said.

“But they’re not. Not anymore.”

Mark paused. His voice was flat. “No. They’re not.”

“Back home,” Miguel said. “I saw it coming. The pattern.”

Mark listened.

“Different uniform.” Miguel’s voice went distant. “Long time ago. But I knew what it looked like when things fell apart. How it started.”

“Just words at first?”

“Words. Then—” Miguel didn’t finish. Didn’t need to.

The door opened. Two women came in, loud and talking over each other. They found a table near the window, their laughter easy in a way Miguel hadn’t heard in a long time.

"Ana’s scared," he said. "Won’t let Sofia play outside anymore. Won’t even take her to the park."

Mark took a drink, set the glass down harder than necessary.

"Guy at her work told her to go back where she came from. Ana speaks better English than he does. I don’t know how to protect them." The words came out quieter than he meant. "I couldn’t protect Rafael. And now—"

Miguel’s phone buzzed. He checked it. Ana: Saliendo de la iglesia. ¿Nos vemos en casa, mi vida?

He typed back: Sí. Ya voy.

But he held on to the phone, looking at her name on the screen. The anger drained out of his face, the way it always did for her.

"She holds all of it," he said. "All the things I don’t bring home." He set the phone face-down, his hand resting on it. "I don’t know how she does it."

"She’s too good for you, amigo."

Miguel nodded slowly, still staring at the screen.

A grin pulled at Mark before he could stop it.

“I ever tell you about that girl from the range?”

“Sarah, right?”

Mark nodded, and his face brightened. “Met her three months ago. She outshot me first day.”

“You let her win?”

“Didn’t have to let her do anything.” A small smile touched the corner of Mark’s mouth. “She won area championship last year. I watched her run a stage and thought she was showing off. Then she did it again, same time, same accuracy. That’s just how she shoots.”

Miguel knew that sound.

“She’s smart,” Mark continued. “Like, really smart. Reads books on tactical history, breaks down match footage like she’s studying film. Can rebuild her race gun blindfolded.” He shook his head, still smiling. “And she’s funny. This dry sense of humor that catches you off guard.”

“You got it bad, hermano.”

“Yeah.” Mark didn’t try to deny it. He was quiet for a moment. “When she looks at me, I feel seen. All of it.”

“She knows about—” Miguel paused.

“She knows. Doesn’t care. Well, she cares, but not like—” Mark struggled to find the words. “She doesn’t treat me like I’m broken. She just... stays.”

Miguel watched his friend’s face. The tension had left Mark’s shoulders. His voice had lost its edge.

“When do I get to meet her?”

“Soon. She’s been asking about you, actually. Wants to know about the guy who kept me from—” Mark stopped. Started again. “The guy who answered the phone at three AM.”

“You did the same for me.”

“That’s different.”

“No it’s not.”

They looked at each other.

The jukebox went quiet. In the silence, they could hear the bartender stacking glasses. The old guy at the end of the bar got up, left cash on the counter, walked out into the night.

Mark finished his Coke. Set the empty glass down.

“If something happens,” Miguel said. “To me. To Ana. If the truck stops being just a truck.”

Mark’s expression shifted. The lightness faded. “I’ll be there. You know that.”

“I know. But if you can’t be there.” Miguel couldn’t quite say it. “She’d need someone.”

“Of course.” Mark nodded slowly. Then, quieter: “And if something happens to me, you look after Sarah.”

“Hermano—”

“I’m serious. She’s good at a lot of things. But she’s not good at asking for help. You know that type.”

He was that type.

“I will,” he said, and extended his hand across the bar.

Mark took it.

The handshake lasted longer than it needed to.

Lo prometido es deuda. Miguel had learned that young. Some promises you kept with your life.

They sat in silence. The bartender brought Mark another Coke without being asked, no straw this time. Miguel pushed his half-full beer away, the glass leaving one final ring on the bar surface.

“You heading home?” Mark asked finally.

“Yeah. You?”

“Yeah. Sarah’s probably wondering where I disappeared to.”

They stood. Miguel left cash on the bar, more than enough to cover both drinks and a decent tip. The bartender nodded at them as they headed for the door.

Outside, the air was cold — October leaning toward November. Their trucks sat under the same streetlight, darkness stretching long across the pavement.

They walked in silence until the shadows parted.

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